What a beautiful story! I had read it before but I think I read it too quickly on the metro and didn't "get the hang of it". How sensitive! I'm really moved! I saw people while I was reading and I also saw myself in some passages. The story is meaningful, the speech is deep, moving and reflective. I could mention several passages that moved me... I could visualize the lake, see the sunlight on it in the shape of a heart, hear the music. The analogy of life and music... Silence also has a speech, a voice... People and we are also impermanent... I could describe your 'flash fiction' in these words: Love, empathy and nostalgia - Poetry. Sorry for written too much. Thank you very much for sharing. 🥲 Congratulations. 😌🙏🩵🩵💚
Hey Helena, thank you for your thoughtful response to my story. I’m delighted you found it so engaging and enjoyed it. I very much enjoyed writing this piece. Flash fiction is short but it can still pack a good punch! Hope you have a great day 😃
What a beautiful story! I had read it before but I think I read it too quickly on the metro and didn't "get the hang of it". How sensitive! I'm really moved! I saw people while I was reading and I also saw myself in some passages. The story is meaningful, the speech is deep, moving and reflective. I could mention several passages that moved me... I could visualize the lake, see the sunlight on it in the shape of a heart, hear the music. The analogy of life and music... Silence also has a speech, a voice... People and we are also impermanent... I could describe your 'flash fiction' in these words: Love, empathy and nostalgia - Poetry. Sorry for written too much. Thank you very much for sharing. 🥲 Congratulations. 😌🙏🩵🩵💚
Hey Helena, thank you for your thoughtful response to my story. I’m delighted you found it so engaging and enjoyed it. I very much enjoyed writing this piece. Flash fiction is short but it can still pack a good punch! Hope you have a great day 😃
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